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Mar_sublime_ocean_cousins practice only

raj_sublime_ocean_cousins
hi
have we to compose and expose and repose and I suppose
all about and rout and stout and no doubt
cousins and raisins and masons only
do tell me
slowly, slowly.... coolly, coolly
wily, nilly
but don't call me silly dilly
is this the kind of poetry votary
and
well I don't have many living ones
souls, wholes and holes
except many the ass types....
who can we
dole pole or console
then hold their
tail, mail and derail

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

Contests have rules, that's what make them contests.

I do not believe the above word dump is a Quatran, thus I do not believe it is a contest submission.

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Jonathan Moore

You give in to easily does the opposite sex know this lol.
I have posted a blog on "Quatrains" so have a look at the first part not the second part where they bring in examples of others works,
Yours Ian

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

all love me Ian
don't you too?
that's why u read all my trash too
hahaahhaaa
this time caught u

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