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Scream (traditional, not original content)

Submitted by weirdelf on Sun, 2015-03-01 13:53

This piece is all about performance, so I'm not even going to post the words.

https://soundcloud.com/user536630132/scream-traditional-scary-song?fb_ac...

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Editing - rough draft

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Rula

Sun, 2015-03-01 14:53

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that was amazing, but for a moment, (you must know when) when I thanked God that I hadn't my headphones on.
A great share indeed
Thank you.

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weirdelf

Sun, 2015-03-01 20:11

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kids love it! They must get a huge adrenalin rush from the fright which they can enjoy, feeling safe afterwards.

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wesley snow

Sun, 2015-03-01 15:46

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Provocative at least. Not yours? Felt like it.

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Seren

Mon, 2015-03-09 10:41

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Its been a while I have been in and out of hospital ... not quite sure what to think of this my mind just couldn't get round it tonight, its not the fault of the poem in this case ?more the fault of the reader being a little brain dead ...

Cheers and hugs Jayne

I have tried to ring you again a couple of times its been hard to catch up with you my friend ... :)

ill be back again I need to here this with a clearer head tbh

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