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Twisted stone
twisted stone
towers
arch like
broken backs
across a
brown-green sky
they are
monumental recognitions
of my tired,
worn,
long
nights
of waiting for the sun
the river runs red
while through the window
acrid smoke
spews and leeks
from hunks
of twisted steel
leering,
smirking
with 12 watt
halogen eyes
and burnt rubber
legs
yet i see
past
for even
when the
white horse
rides the earth
and the
beast lifts
its seven heads to roar
even then
when all seems lost
the shine of the sun
will still
grace all edges
of the earth
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
riotface97
Thu, 2015-02-26 18:15
Please tell me what you think
Please tell me what you think
Race_9togo
Thu, 2015-02-26 20:46
Hello Riot.
What do I think?
I think this is good. I see one ot two minor things that you might wish to change, but I love the imagery and the message.
Keep writing.
Respectfully, Race
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