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Hello all Happy Valentine Day

Hello all Happy Valentine Day

Love is a feeling,
unexplainable by anyone,
some see in love
a mom’s affection,
another a friends imagination,
yet many see love,
mostly as sex
in all its manifestation

But love has a special meaning for two,
who know they love each other
the way you do.
Valentines come and they go,
all that I know
love alone has its unique flow.

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we are all actors of poetry.. says it all. what else do we need? keep on writing... acting.

to you
we have not read each other
thanks for the maiden comment
i visited ur profile
now i add you to

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the message is clear and this piece is like a simple but precious gift for those who celebrated Valentine's Day.

love to me comes in many forms
and each of them has its own thorns
a mother's love carries the life in her womb
and risks death in its release to the world
a husband and father's love toiling everyday
to offer his family the best he can give
a brotherly and sisterly love promotes unity
the acceptance of flaws and strength
a lover's love lies in the eyes of oneself
to surrender and triumph at the same time
and all the love you seek is like a rose
once you tamed the thorns, its beauty is yours

Alid

when married then true love you may define
that's a challenge of mine

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not when I do enjoy being single. ;D

Alid

how will u know of a loss of not being married
in any case ur FREEDOM will be sliced
if not slaughtered
we all love it later
thereafter without sacrifice
their can be no peace
as in pieces we will
as we do live

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but before I can consider it, I need to be able to take care of myself first, need to get well first so for now I shall shun the thought until I am ready.

Alid

of thy weapons tc
which one??
all hahahaaaa

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I think the rest is waffle :)
Love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

as usual
shall wafflett out

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