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Narcotic Rhythm

Narcotic rhythm
pounding beat,
hypnotize and set me free.

When that sound hits,
I lose myself,
I let go.

Chorus

Turn up the heat,
make me high.
Body sways, releasing me.

Chorus

Stomp and shout.
A drug free buzz,
body moves, relieving me.

Bass rips through my chest,
I become more like myself,
with every depression of the keys.

Crazy darkness,
wraps me in it’s web,
and i'm gone.

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Ive been writing lyrics for a while, remember the chat I hosted?

I like the title , so I will keep that.

Thank you

Love Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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in this write you have scripted so very well how the beats & rhythm temper our moods ..feelings and emotions...atleast that's what i perceived after reading your write...i enjoyed it..

warmly...

raj (sublime_ocean)

thank you

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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was my perception right?

warmly..

raj (sublime_ocean)

you are correct.

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Hate to admit it but when I looked at the original title, it sounded like something a police man would do. Lol

But don't gloat, lmao.

Love Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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As you know i started writing lyrics a little while before i hosted the lyric chat afternoon. it frees you up.

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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