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LOVE

I AM SOMETHING
MANY DONT KNOW ME
I AM IN SOMEONE
MANY TRY TO HAVE ME

A FEELING I AM DEFINED AS SUCH
BUT ONLY NOW NOT KNOWN
THE CENTUARRY CHANGES
DAYS GO BY
HOURS DRIFT AWAY
MINUETS BECOME SECONDS
BUT I STAY THE SAME

HATE IS JUST MY OPPOSITE
WITH HATE THERES NO ME
YOU CANT HAVE ME
JUST NOT YET

THE YOUTH ENJOY ME AND FIGHT
THE OLD BRING KIDS
IM THE WOND OF A WOMAN
I CONECT MANY
I BOND VERRY FUN

MY NAME IS HARD TO CALL OUT
EXPECIALY IF YOU DONT MEAN IT
EYES SAY IT OUT LOUD AND CLEAR
I GO BETWEEN TWO SOULS
I BRING UP A FAMILY

I HAVE JEALOUCY
I HAVE TRUST
I HAVE DETERMINATION
I HAVE COMMITMENT
I HAVE CMOMMUNICATION
WITHOUT THOSE IM NOT ALIVE

MY NAME AS A FEELING
MY NAME AS A BOND
MY NAME IS LOVE

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Free verse
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okay thanks for the advice

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It's a beautiful poem!

Åłåńå Fłøręš

thanks i'm happy you loved it

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