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Lady Knight and Feminist Scientist (Humor in Poetry) ws Pt 2 (Judyanne)

Lady Knight, Knights of Chivalry
Soul passion, her creation, her discernment
her inherent talent, arts and technology
She strived to attain knowledge from the Internet.

During her virtual interaction she met a feminist scientist
name Samantha.

Then Lady Knight resigned from Chivalry
Burnt her bra in a fit of revelry
and spent her talent chasing the science
of pendulum swing and the associated relevance

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I keep coming back to this trying to find some secondary meaning which might make me see the humor in this. Alas I fear I can't find it. It's a fine poem save a typo or two but to me it's just not funny. Of course it might still be me being too obtuse to see it......stan

It (or you lol) is a little obtuse perhaps but -
what happens to a woman's 'physique' when she burns her bra?

one hopes that this is subtle humour .... don't always need such obvious things as farts
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

It gets through my thick skull, Ignore my previous comment. BTW, what does a 70 year old woman have between her breasts that a 20 year old doesn't?...............her belly button lol.....NOWIRUNQUICKLYTOSHELTER

Where is the like button?
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

Good collaborative poem strung together at short notice.

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

It was hard but I'm always up for a challenge

*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.

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