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Of Happiness
Of Happiness
I have all along been sitting and glossing
under an apple tree
all my life
what happiness can be
a simple comparison of combined incidents
some happy
some sorry
and
from the milk of both
if you can but extract
the elixir of happiness
twill a successful story be
of what happiness tis
your poetry lends happiness to me
but let me be happy
and
so end here my story
one must simply be just happy!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
wesley snow
Sat, 2015-01-17 18:41
Just happy
is hard. Good poem kid.
W. H. Snow
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lovedly
Tue, 2015-01-20 09:23
thank you so much Snow man
with Love from kid
loved and lovedly one
like a son eh!
alidzain
Tue, 2015-01-20 01:11
Hi loved
another good one.
Alid
mand
Tue, 2015-01-20 04:53
Yes
I agree, good poem!
Love Mand xxx
lovedly
Wed, 2021-11-17 20:21
NEWER GENERATION MUST
KNOW
What Happiness is
my four happy poems read one by one please