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the world beckons who first ,
the world beckons who first ,
none know
who will have the first cup
you, i or Joe
tis all unknown
but the fact that i have an eagles eye
and a monsters fastidious brain
can't be just let go down any drain
in stream all my works shall remain
let our grandchildren read the same
and like Jess ,
hopefully they will not call us insane
as jokers amongst poets
we leave by the bye lane
let us as Neopoets
till then remain
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Ian.T
Fri, 2015-01-09 04:30
Loved
A thought is eternal a write has to have a thought so just work it out, your words will be for ever,
Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
lovedly
Fri, 2015-01-09 10:09
Thank you so much
that is my endeavour
Ian my friend here
there are many more also dear
judyanne
Wed, 2015-01-14 00:41
i like this loved
You haven't waffled, it is concise and to the point, and it works well
Love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
lovedly
Wed, 2015-01-14 11:03
I like your frankness ..judy
Yeah...
I haven't waffled here at all
as I do ere summer
as ere fall
I am loved after all
mand
Wed, 2015-01-14 11:24
Your poems will always remain
Your poems will always remain,
they wont go down the drain!
because they are so clever
they'll be here forever!
Nice poem Loved
Love Mand xxxx
lovedly
Wed, 2015-01-14 11:53
thanks mand
u r so kind
when I am being read
yet not dead
do say who is reading
please I'd love to hear voices
even when I'm deaffy