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Skin Deep Beauty You Say

Submitted by loved on Mon, 2011-01-10 13:16

Beauty You Say
Is Skin Deep

In my own experience
Studying the lives of so many folks,
I have clearly seen
Those who have regular sex
Including solo,
Have glowing skin.

Go see the guys face
And
His 59 years old wives’
Glistening at ninety four
And
They could deliver still
What will creams do?
Except make your beauty still

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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loved

Mon, 2011-01-10 14:12

loved's picture

his
wive's.....

and what happened to my royaaaalty poems
read enticed posted as blog now

I WENT TO THE BIGGEST WINE STORE HERE
ITALLIAN CHIANTII OR WHAT U SAID
WHO DID U GIVE IT TO ANY WAY
WAS THERE OF IT
NO MENTION IN MONTREAL
I MAY SAY.
WINE OR WHISKEY WHAT NOW DO U HAVE TO SAY

loved

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loved

Mon, 2011-01-10 16:12

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A Man is Less Costly
He does all the house chores,
As and when you’re in parlour stores
Or buying crème may be,
He attends to kids,
Here i do see.

This guy’s wife goes to work
And he can't his duty shirk,
He goes to school,
Drops the kids,
Keeps one busy at home
While the child plays
He cooks his way
And
Then gets back to school

His wife's no fool,
She keeps him busy all day,
So that the mice doesn’t play,
When the cat is away
When she comes home,
He’s laid the table
And serves dinner
Which is with kids?
Not too few.

loved

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