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Hibernation Voices Merry Christmas

Hibernation Voices Merry Christmas
I went into
across the globe
unknown to anyone
no laptop
no cell
no connection with the outside world

but now I learn
none misses anyone
when gone for a wee moment
what will or does happen
when we have gone
on the path eternal
none is missed
But some friends like
you are the only one
who dost exist
I insist

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You see I missed the young Bard as he was gone for a moment of my time, I will refer to time as it is your creation.
Here we missed you in the now, which is ours for always.
I hope you are wel young Bard and that you will not seek to tend to our feelings in such ways again.
There is a new year dawning soon and in it I see that you are becoming more than even you could invent.
Have a great seasons Holiday and then seek the new fields that are spread out for you in 2015,
Yours as always, Ian

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

then there would have been
no need of searching for irons
you are the greatest one
who calms bruised ones

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