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THOUGHTS
IT WAS IN YOUR EYES
LAST NIGHT I THOUGHT ABOUT YOU
I CAN NOT DENY IT BUT YES
YOU MAKE ME HAPPY
A DAY GOES BY AND I ASK WHERE ARE YOU
A ROCK OF A SOFT SPOT IS WHAT YOU ARE
YOU ARE THE AWESOME WEATHER EVERYONE LOVES
WHAT DO YOU TO BE IN ME?
FRIENDSHIP HAS A BOND BUT NOT LIKE THIS
THE FEELING YOU GIVE ME IS PLEASURE
INSIDE YOU BREAK ME UP
IF ONLY I COULD SEE THE FUTURE
I WOULD OPEN IT AND PUT YOU IN IT
YOU ARE A PLACE BEYOND WONDERLAND
I CALL BY A NAME
YOU WANT IT TO BE GREAT
YOU WANT TO HELP ME
BUT MY HEATS IS NOT FOR HELP
MY THOUGHTS ARE ALL ON YOU
by:AMOGELANG
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AMOGELANG MOKOBANE
Fri, 2014-12-19 04:03
ITS Sad
ITS Sad
author commentBarbara Writes
Fri, 2014-12-19 23:24
Wonderful poem Amogelang
Poetry is best READ when Not written in all caps.
Though a beautiful poem It like shouting and screaming it from the mountaintop to the young lady at the bottom of the Grand Canyon looking up at you with a smile bc she heard you loud and clear.
Welcome to neopoet. I hope to read more of your romantic love poems.
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AMOGELANG MOKOBANE
Wed, 2015-01-21 09:46
I'M HAPPY YOU LOVE THE POEM
I'M HAPPY YOU LOVE THE POEM
author commentEsker
Sat, 2015-01-03 01:55
different mind tract
like it...
some concepts were different in initial read
but eventually thinking about this
it will find a meaning in my old noodle..
people are determined to see through
Love is not an easy game..
like playing a game of hard contact sport
of unicycle...that dont come easy..
bumps and lumps
other then the loud caps
removal i like this poem also!
thank you
AMOGELANG MOKOBANE
Wed, 2015-01-21 09:47
IM GLAD THANKS A LOT
IM GLAD THANKS A LOT
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