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Power Burn
position taken
position set
drive the anchor pin
we shall not be moved
this is war
suck it up
shut the fuck up
can't hear you
lalalalalla
wrong
wrongwrongwrong
monger monger
mangy monger
shut 'em down
power to us
power for us
a power lust
burning righteous
burning within
burn baby burn
burn it down
burn them bridges
bras, cards, flags, symbols
cars, stores, books, badges
burn 'em down
burn the whole fuckin' house down
burn, burn, burn
that'll teach 'em
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Comments
eightmenout
Thu, 2014-12-11 15:14
Al
Great flow, nice sing song effect, and a solid topic. Loved it
Thanks for posting
Scott
brittle light
Sat, 2014-12-13 23:25
Scott
thanks,
I appreciate your remarks
Al
raj
Sun, 2014-12-14 12:15
great outburst with a
great outburst with a psychedelic edge to the free verse....
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
brittle light
Sun, 2014-12-21 09:26
a belated thank you
a belated thank you
I appreciate your reaction
regards,
Al