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Definitely Always Something
Never quite hip
never quite timeless
but
definitely always fearless
In rainbow ships
your chakras less
so
probably never tireless
Vibrations flip
in streams of stringless
chords
perhaps always hapless
Creation is definitely always something...
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Comments
judyanne
Mon, 2014-12-01 22:37
hi ells
your chakras less ... wondering re the text ... do you mean to use an apostrophe?
love - perhaps always hapless lol
and great alliteration especially with the esses
an intruguing and fun read - i enjoyed this
nothing to really suggest
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
judyanne
Mon, 2014-12-01 22:39
hi ells
your chakras less ... wondering re the text ... do you mean to use an apostrophe?
love - perhaps always hapless lol
and great alliteration especially with the esses
an intruguing and fun read - i enjoyed this
nothing to really suggest
love judy
xxx
so sorry - i don't understand why i'm doubling up - it has happened a few times - lol - my latest post even went on twice!!!
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)