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Pillow Note # 3
Sweetheart
I know you are feeling Blue
so I wrote this note on Pink
to make you blush so Beau
like "Peaches"
my nick for You...
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raj
Sun, 2011-01-09 06:55
Dearest Shirl...
i can just say WOW....what a lovely Pillow Note...who will ever say NO to "want to play Birds and bees" i am sure your Beau will go head over heals reading that..lol...
much love... and smiles..
raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentraj
Sun, 2011-01-09 06:58
Dearest JayCee
a good idea..we could all contribute to that collection...certainly for a worthy cause these pillow notes are supposed to do ...to light up the lives of spouses by re-kindling the flame of romance...
much love n smiles..
raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentraj
Sun, 2011-01-09 13:56
Dearest Shirl..
wow again....thats an absolutely stimulating pillow note....surely a re-kindling stuff....
much love...
raj (sublime_ocean)
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