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The Poet's Words (with spoken word)(Limerick WS)
Whatever the poets would write,
if dark or those of delight,
they must affect,
and well reflect,
for the blind and the one with sight.
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How does this theme appeal to you?
Last few words:
I have added a record so you tell me how bad or good was that
Editing stage:
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Comments
raj
Sat, 2014-11-08 03:44
Rula
Good write with a message in your limerick. See if the suggested tweak below works for you
Whatever be a poetic write,
be it dark or of delight,
let it affect,
cause to reflect,
the blind and those with sight.
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Sat, 2014-11-08 03:52
Hello Raj
and thanks for your comment and the suggestions. I believe the same massage can be delivered in millions ways.
Have your suggestions come to smooth the rhythm or for other purpose?
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raj
Sat, 2014-11-08 05:17
Not sure if the suggestion is
Not sure if the suggestion is smooth or good on rhyme
raj (sublime_ocean)
weirdelf
Sat, 2014-11-08 10:50
excellent
you have achieved both serious content and lyricism
cheers,
Jess
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