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How shitty another ditty (Serious Limericks)

I see that you all have a hate of me
My sorrows drag and won’t let me free
Here is safe within
I will swig another gin
Lest the terror of my hate is all you see

"Time for bed" said Zebadee, boyng, boyng..
Yours Sparrow, well it is late, night, night.

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Structured: Western
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Just for fun, Love you all !!!
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Damn them English Blue berries lol,
Yours Ian x

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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The other Pic was a while back and has worn out as we do when years pass by lol , Thanks for your approval, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

author comment

this is your latest edition?

But you r looking reasonably young
youth of old age
tis this one!

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