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We write to while

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2014-09-18 11:07

We write to while
they read to,
at us smile
we love to be heard
that's our style
they have but to walk
that extra mile
so Neopoets
smile with me
I will also with thee

but let you all smile
along with us,
but not at us
will all smile please....

So smile will ye
all neopoets
as does this loved
lovedly

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

alidzain

Sat, 2014-09-20 05:13

alidzain's picture

say cheeese! lol. I wonder if it will be better to entitle this piece "Smiling Together". Good one.

Alid

lovedly

Sat, 2014-09-20 08:30

lovedly's picture

u smile let others see
thank you wait and see
as u smile with me

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