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A JOURNEY WITHOUT DESTINATION
Too far down the road
have we travelled
in too short a span of time
No turning back now
the engine has whirred
into motion
My innuendo
and subtle overtures
becoming more brazen
by the moment
your shy, awkward
and gently yielding responses
released race horses
into my blood
What started out as a
spark is now
an engulfing flame
My cup of erotica
offered to you
is mixed with uncertainty
and crawls
with guilt
Did I need to
steer this unsullied
relationship
down a complicated
path
of uncertainty
to a point of no return
and no arrival
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Comments
raj
Wed, 2014-09-10 11:31
Leonard
The title fits this poem like a glove. The internal commotion caused by an unsullied relationship expressed profoundly.
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
Leonard
Thu, 2014-09-11 00:56
Thank you Raj
Your visits and comments mean a lot to me.
Cheers mate
Leonard Daranjo
"When the waiting stops, the living begins"
Lonnie
Wed, 2014-09-10 12:37
Hello Leonard
I found a typo, I believe, line 17 the word AND should be AN, if I'm reading the thought pattern right, LOL!! You have captured a good theme here and the poem is very readable!
Leonard
Thu, 2014-09-11 00:58
Thanks Lonie
for visiting and pointing out the typo. I have corrected it.
Leonard Daranjo
"When the waiting stops, the living begins"