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Bend down theThames POETRY REPLACED TO AVOID OPPORTUNITY LOSS

Bend down the Thames

I know the bend
down the Thames
where we met first time
and
you remember the bend
where it did end

and
we kissed
for the first time.

Tis ages past
the bends of rivers don't last
we both have walked by so fast
the end has been forgotten at last

the last time we met
twas at the end
the then permanent bend
twill be there till our end
meet me then there
before our end
dearest friend!

Style / type: 
Free verse
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This is too strange for my tastes.

W. H. Snow

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