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I SHAN'T SAY GOODBYE;;;the undiscovered

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2014-08-17 17:57

I SHAN'T SAY GOODBYE
YOU know why there is none awaiting to be read the undiscovered list between
Rula and me
is dead you had promised but never read
Esker
fell in line but found nothing to mine so did
Alid tis all fine that ends with all pins nine
Ian,
epicurial or not lest we all forgot
Stan has no poetic fever on his behalf we did deliver and now
Undiscovered
ones have no liver
ALL
go and see if you still don't believe me
Loved
has proved his worth
Jess
where are you hiding in the dense POETIC jungles Come and see what your
Students
do bring a great fortune and glow to show
Neopoets
all now know undiscovered has had an

Abortion

No punctuation ....

New poetry breathless.... read without hesitation.
Elipses
et all poetry is
Free verse after all
lovedly loved

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Rula

Mon, 2014-08-18 17:06

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Yeah, not yet
Don't say goodbye.
thank you.

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lovedly

Mon, 2014-08-18 17:57

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yet

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Ian.T

Mon, 2014-08-18 19:10

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There are bad days when a name disappears from the Neopoet site.
Loved will stay, or I will hunt him down, and lock him away in a monastery, with a cloak and quill.
I will be kind and give him some ink, so that he doesn't have to use his own blood to write.
Neopoet will be here when I leave young Bard, I expect you to carry on for much longer, there are some that are leaving soon but they should let us know, I have asked them to write to us as and when time permits.
All in this world is not as it seems but it is still a wonderful place,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

lovedly

Mon, 2014-08-18 21:24

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so far have survived
many have run away
passed or died
no one cried
I alone in the site take pride
so will I never hide
let you all be my guide

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