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I, and They.
We sit with rain upon the roof, trundling in waves
steady like the arriving,
steady like the leaving.

No one fighting front to front
over lines that are not even
existant

as sure though as our distance

feel them watching
and i'm tired unsure
so show
i'm uncaring

i want the rain on my shoulders
sure as the all broken
i accept as tokens

acceptance too real a cost
a world
i never lived
but thrived to own
a silver town
in a snow globe

a heart
in the fingers of my
cage
each ring
a key
each word
unfurling
darkness
to sleep

im lean
but my ego
too large
to squeeze
within

they fly
in the dark
to land
on the hearts
throne

their brilliant eyes
the cold stone

an epitaph smile
a loop like the miles
while the racetrack
crowd roars
behind our happy
murmurs

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Comments

rula and I have decided to keep the undiscovered list to zero

will you also join our group too...
my dear Esker
Yu and I have been read fully
all dues are now nil

thank you for the invite!

author comment

we must take the lead
to keep the morale of poets like me
and please do read

GRIEF IN BRIEF
many want a copy of it
I did permit it as

@anony

join in the melee or take a stand break the spelle. E ey

author comment

undiscovered ==zero as of now
did u read the
grief in brief

As always loved reading your work, got the impression that someone was getting ready to travel. To wander free so to speak. Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

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