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The American girls from New York
When I went to Times Square
in New York
I smiled at one without care
a gal threatened to call 911
I said what the hell
I am square
look here
see there
where did you come in?
I wonder
she smiled and gave me her number
but then I went back into my slumber
what is 911
I did wonder....
Was it her number?
I called and police came in
thank god she was a lady
asked me about my problem
then said ring me up
whenever you wish to
what’s your number?
I asked
but she was fast
she fled
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Rula
Sun, 2014-08-10 16:05
This gives me
a smile, but then this indicates that you're a male :), doesn't it?
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lovedly
Sun, 2014-08-10 17:05
I am what I actually am
An actor of poetry
I get into each and every
HUMAN AND ANIMAL form conceivable
you just have to ask me
alidzain
Mon, 2014-08-11 18:11
loved
This is what I call a "gender confirmation" poem. lol. Nice job.
Envy is an ugly thing,
so I say
but I can't escape its clutches
anyway..
When I see lovers
holding hands,
I wish I have a lover
who'll treat me like a man
to chase away lonely nights
and keep me company
when I'm out of the fight.
The right girl just for me
I know its pathetic
but what can I do?
I'm feeling so lonely
and that's the truth..
Alid
lovedly
Mon, 2014-08-11 23:23
HAhahahah
ahaahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
the whole truth