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Renga 9 "Hatred's Legacy"
This is a renga workshop designed to capture the feelings of people in or once was in any strained relationship. If you'd like to share your lively haiku, senyru, tanka or two liner of your heated emotion, join my unique renga workshop and share it here in a collaboratively written renga poem.
Come one come all. A stop by is all it takes to add your addition to the poem.
Senyru
I've often struck back
Words of nails aimed for your eyes
Your fiery assaults
Barbara Writes
Tanka
My mind held vice like
Kept me a captive for years
Now I am so free
I was feared to even leave
Why could I not see my life
Ian. T
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Billy Collins, Shakespeare, Emily Dickinson, Whitman, Jess Tapper
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Ian.T
Sat, 2014-08-02 03:55
Barbara just a thought
An addition to the Renga if it goes that way, I think more women are ill treated than men so this can be added at some time, meanwhile I shall think of other lines to try and achieve a better Renga,
Yours as always Ian.T
Beatings, Beatings, Beat.
I now just wander the street
Where I am so free
No more to take life's big fake
I sent him to his hell's door.
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Barbara Writes
Sun, 2014-08-03 23:44
Great addition
It's gonna be an interesting workshop. I hope some Neopoet females will also join and add some feeling of hatred wherever it may come from to this poem.
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
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author commentlonlyhrtsclub13
Mon, 2014-08-11 07:51
is it too late to contribute
I seem to be an expert on this topic...am I able to try
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
Barbara Writes
Mon, 2014-08-11 22:36
Lonely
I would love to have you contribute. The more the better. It is not to late. It is open till Sunday night. Just click the link and you'll be on the workshop. Since you are an expert, you don't need me to tell you how it works. Just read the poem and write your addition to compliment the last stanza..
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
Neopoet Community
author commentlonlyhrtsclub13
Tue, 2014-08-12 07:07
an expert
Only on the topic of bad relationship, counting syllables I can use help with. Thank you.
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
Barbara Writes
Tue, 2014-08-12 16:17
Lol silly me as always.
Go to the top of the workshop where the syllabus is and there is a syllable counter link. It's not perfect but it is a great help.
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
Neopoet Community
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