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FROST PATTERNS

Submitted by scribbler on Tue, 2011-01-04 17:40

Frost on my windshield
unique crystals now revealed
soon to warmth they yield

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Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - draft

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magics02

Tue, 2011-01-04 17:46

Short and sweet
shovels snow in the street
I hope you endure the cold
warm fire and piggy toes:)

Happy New Year friend hope this finds you feeling good and writing your heart out.

Love Mona

scribbler

Tue, 2011-01-04 20:22

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all is well here but unsure if writing heart out or ass off lol........................stan

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magics02

Tue, 2011-01-04 21:11

I knew you were a keeper here and I enjoy your continued friendship. Power to Stan the Man and great writing in the New Year for all!!

che bello

scribbler

Tue, 2011-01-04 20:23

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yes, but given time to look at it....................................stan

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mand

Tue, 2011-01-04 17:48

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Beautiful patterns, each one unique.

clever little poem.

Thanks for sharing Stan.

Love Mand xxxxx

scribbler

Tue, 2011-01-04 20:24

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and thanks for reading my rhyku.................stan

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