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coming...a new ..a fresh light in the sky!

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2014-06-25 13:54

lights lit up the streets
of Paris
and
London's streets
so also American

the American doll
of TIME SQUARE awaits
the one who adores
all gals are fair
some are tall
many small

I await the one who will last with me
no not as an American doll
but a pretty lovely one
for Lovedly
as Loved has gone...
technically

we all by now know it
a distant star
shines in the sky
but
who knows how long twill be
before the newer
Lovedly
is accepted by all ye...

In continuation of an incomplete sojourn
friends Stan ....Ian and moonman!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Wed, 2014-06-25 18:33

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By any other name you will smell just as sweet lol.
Young Bard a really great step in reorganisation, I may have to re-join and become Ian . Tly but no can't think of a good reason to do that I would not be able to become Yently or Sparrowly Ily wouldly neverly bely anythingly differently damnly itsly gotly holdly ofly mely ( Shake yourself Ian.T it is not real just a bad dream )
There that's better I have shaken the ly off of my tail, great to have you back, I will figure out why you had to leave loved and return as Lovedly. I shall ask Google,
Google said "youly realy wantly toly knowly", I just gave up ..
Have a lovely day out there and lovely to have you here no matter what name you use, Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

lovedly

Sat, 2014-06-28 11:12

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and
thanks Richards
you are the chosen guide
from you I can't hide

You are Richard Sir,
we all know
under you candle light
we all shall glow...

glad that loved and lovedly,
technically is one
now you also know.
thanks in the hour of need,
let past be past
we both agree
you are the mentor of most
and
so I love you equally
and
as the best
the most

With all my love
Neopoet has taught me
to forget the I in me

.Hopefully I will
if all of so desire too...

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lovedly

Sat, 2014-07-19 01:00

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Marvellously put across...MOSTLY we all are followers

I used to vomit pages of poetry.... till they curbed me... as mine was trash... I went elsewhere... now I must thank the ones here... as I am being read ... so much paper will be needed... to cover me when dead ....and all will be printed poetry... as some had said ...’’’’ friend do write on you can please none but history will tell when you are actually dead ...’’’’
‘’this was the poet alive since long .....’’’
so was Shakespeare ...he did not fear ....and I am a secluded bard....who is surpassed... but do I damn care... when guys like you... better than most are surpassed ...I am nothing but well ---------add adjectives replete.... with no one here do I compete ...dear Esker

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