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Point of View
I stood there with you
Looking out of your window
It was bright for me
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How does this theme appeal to you?
Last few words:
Points of view (Senyru) for those hat only see the dark out there..
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Comments
weirdelf
Fri, 2014-05-30 09:12
suberb senryu
it was bright for me too.
cheers,
Jess
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Ian.T
Fri, 2014-05-30 14:41
Jess
That the view from your window was bright was good for me to hear, take care young traveller,
Yours Ian.T
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Emina Smajevic
Fri, 2014-05-30 13:38
so so good :))
so so good :))
Emina
Maybe it's better to stay completely within
as fire hides in metal
as water hides in rock.
Rumi
Ian.T
Fri, 2014-05-30 14:43
Emina
Never let others darken your view, thanks for your visit,
Yours as always Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..