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'hark my heart stops
stress stalks me
I sweat helplessly....
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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Ian.T
Thu, 2014-05-01 17:35
Loved
Though my heart doth beat strongly
Your words fell short as title displayed
If thou doth require correction
Pray take to you my words:-
Hark my heart doth stop
stress stalks me on silent wings
I sweat helplessly.
Love to our one Loved
That he should toil unaided
When our help is nigh,
Yours Ian.T
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So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Thu, 2014-05-01 22:28
great vision
tis best to traverse
on known sands
than walk across drier grass ...
I shall limit to my hall of fame
lest I earn greater ...defame
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emeka ozurumba
Sat, 2014-05-03 10:12
lovely mingling
lovely mingling
loved
Sat, 2014-05-03 13:27
thanks
we mingle to gingle
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Rula
Sat, 2014-05-03 10:31
Loved this from both of you
Loved this from both of you dear friends.
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weirdelf
Thu, 2014-05-15 08:53
I can relate to that.
I can relate to that.
cheers,
Jess
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loved
Thu, 2014-05-15 11:39
that you can
makes me smile
Sir Jess
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