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Mind... a lit candle This is new and latest

Submitted by loved on Fri, 2014-05-09 00:55

Mind is an ever glowing candle....
which lights up the whole world ..
lead kindly light
into the hearts of darkened souls
who need to evaluate themselves first..
than preach ,
in the shallowness of wisdom...
an egoists resort!

Short sweet and simple.

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Tue, 2014-05-13 04:36

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What ever keeps you as a good person then walk that pathway the end product is the same no matter which rules you follow.
Rules and religions are only guide lines for life it is up to each person how they interpret them, these writes are too open to critical comments as they border on inflicting rules of life on others, when they have their own minds,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Tue, 2014-05-13 09:10

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follow my mind
Have I?ian>>>>

loved

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