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Sijo Skirt tail in the wind

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Sat, 2014-04-19 01:06

High winds in spring, flip the skirt tail of his girl, unaware. 
Her dress tail is like a parachute; modesty is lost;
he quickly covers her and protects his girl's dignity.

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Sijo is a new form of poetry writing I found fun to write. If you want to learn more about its form PM me and Ill share what I know. Or you can research like I did.
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Sun, 2014-04-20 05:07

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What a lovely fresh write, and the finding of Sijo, I shall have to add it to my Poetry types.
Loved it,
Yours Ian.T

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Barbara Writes

Mon, 2014-04-21 00:21

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Glad you loved it. I like learning writing different forms of poetry. Glad to share with Neopoets.

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