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d e s u l t a t i o n z
fragrance
set like waves
upon the valley
the wind shift
dance
in the dirt dry grass
cry alive
the bitter burr
the clasp brass
golden sheen
of the watch machine
step on gusts of routes
and rows
spinning clouds
aloud
and new
of all things
auld
of what was took
and knew
these soft sup shines
touches kind
nudges
like knees
upon velvet cushion
pews
velveteen
surmises
in quick
gasps
and pearl
handled
gladness
like levers of
madness
passing in shapes
ribbons and flags
polished like
barrels
backs straight
as nuns
the night dark
fluid runs
speaking words
like oracle
rivers
and whispering
creeks
bend a moment
an ear
fallen hair
full of lustre
in light
the spirit
sighs
aligns
in starglints
in sparking
flints
these tastes
of incense
and cordite
motherland
and dirt
Comments
Ian.T
Mon, 2014-04-14 19:29
Steve
This was great as usual, loved the images that appeared as if you were laying in a valley floor and letting the scenery flow over your senses.
Your sounds of feelings portrayed in rythme as if you were floating around in a beautiful dream, this is where you have that ability to write the words and send us the picture, maybe you should start teaching,
Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Esker
Mon, 2014-04-14 23:17
was told by psych nurse...not one of ours here..
that i was like a cult leader...
but i disagree..
those have very high intelligence
these imageries are gallerys
there another twixt
lest i am bewitched
by the poet verse
niche
which is implying not twixt
but
alas poor ol thrice..
Ian.T
Tue, 2014-04-15 04:43
Steve
You have the ability in your mind to do many things,
your words:-
that i was like a cult leader...
but i disagree..
those have very high intelligence.
Even here you have backed off from your worth, and those small I's.
Damn it you are worth more than a big I in the works you do.
Talk later, when this day has had enough.
Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..