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d e s u l t a t i o n z

fragrance
set like waves
upon the valley
the wind shift
dance
in the dirt dry grass

cry alive
the bitter burr
the clasp brass
golden sheen
of the watch machine

step on gusts of routes
and rows
spinning clouds
aloud
and new

of all things
auld
of what was took
and knew

these soft sup shines
touches kind
nudges
like knees
upon velvet cushion
pews

velveteen
surmises
in quick
gasps
and pearl
handled
gladness
like levers of
madness

passing in shapes
ribbons and flags
polished like
barrels
backs straight
as nuns

the night dark
fluid runs
speaking words
like oracle
rivers
and whispering
creeks

bend a moment
an ear
fallen hair
full of lustre
in light

the spirit
sighs
aligns
in starglints
in sparking
flints

these tastes
of incense
and cordite
motherland
and dirt

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Comments

This was great as usual, loved the images that appeared as if you were laying in a valley floor and letting the scenery flow over your senses.
Your sounds of feelings portrayed in rythme as if you were floating around in a beautiful dream, this is where you have that ability to write the words and send us the picture, maybe you should start teaching,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

that i was like a cult leader...
but i disagree..
those have very high intelligence

these imageries are gallerys
there another twixt

lest i am bewitched
by the poet verse
niche

which is implying not twixt
but

alas poor ol thrice..

author comment

You have the ability in your mind to do many things,
your words:-
that i was like a cult leader...
but i disagree..
those have very high intelligence.

Even here you have backed off from your worth, and those small I's.
Damn it you are worth more than a big I in the works you do.
Talk later, when this day has had enough.
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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