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LAZI TERRAZE
sit close to me...
but i like alone
its a place i know
youve found me
here
made your place
made me yours
behind closed doors
and the terrace
tops
marriage could
hold you
more then these
useless arms
only good for pushing
never taking
gentle
tender
loving
my scars
dont touch them
so you put your
own down
made me burn
and ache
forever
each time
i hear the
songs
never meant
for me
but you watch
you feel
me
through
all the anger
feeding
its energy
to the sails of
your soul
blaze in
walking barefoot
standing over
me at night
thought you were
stealing my money
a hammer behind
your back
but you were just
watching me
like i watch the horizon
open and unknown
you love me more
then i want to love you
you want my scar
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Comments
Ian.T
Sat, 2014-04-12 04:16
Steve
This is unusual for you a story so bold, a love that is maybe known but not understood, a lovely story.
The one that seems to think they are beyond love, and the other just loves and cares, loved its story,
Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Esker
Sat, 2014-04-12 12:49
cronenberg and lynch
are the ones i relate too easily..
pulp dark pop intellects
the cohen brothers more articulate and intellectual
my wavelength is either micro or subsonic
macro or panoramic
focus has always been the hardest
cappola and kubrick my daughters great passions
she a painter and writer poet like i
unhoned and more raw
wealthy people interest me
as i am the nick and ding guy
nickle and dime
yet my wealth is within my eyes
my walk my experiences
lifer
locked away in thoughts
m ost days
the dazzle of the vision
at the edge..the mirage
the delving
nose in the wind
read you like deep purple
and whistle test
great footage
simple is best
joy division and the underground youth
both from manchester i like very
much now
i know i am loved
here and in my life
i clean up great
but look pretty raggedy
most days
like kellys heros
donald sutherland
character
and people in my real
life.....total lifers
to all systems
and rebels
walking double edges
it can be done
nicks
thank you ian
will keep up my themes
here
on poetry and
get around to recording
a poem so you all
can hear what i sound
like.