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Who was She
She came for a moment
a fleeting one
just to give me energy
Divine
she was drunk by my eyes
and like wine dissolved
into the universe
in a momentous moment
gave me the fruits of joy
men need most
of an intent
to creativity
a beautiful content
and in the eyes of god
she merged after that monumentous moment...
devoid of all love and emotion
she did vanish
why did she have to come
and
a truthful heart
a soul banish
heaven alone knows
why so!
lovely poet she was
twas..
on another site 300
have read i since
here none still!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
raj
Thu, 2014-03-13 13:31
Loved
Is this about the experience when an idea makes a brief appearance in your mind for a poem before quickly disappearing?
raj (sublime_ocean)
loved
Thu, 2014-03-13 23:58
well sort of
on fb
some unknown gal wanted to know more about me
gave a lecture very poetic
and when I revealed portions to her
she vanished
leaving my mind in the lurch
glad u appreciated it
loved