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cherise chime

Submitted by Esker on Sun, 2011-01-02 11:49

touch me where I burn
your pang
a key in the black latch
the long hair
soft
like snow descending
in its fall

this burial love
that churns
beneath the winters
hush

let me heal these
visions with hands
reading you where
they touch

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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magics02

Sun, 2011-01-02 16:15

Bravo and Happy new Year to you esker. Hope you are staying warm where you are. Nice to read you once again

Mona Mia

weirdelf

Sat, 2015-01-10 10:34

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yes, elegant and meaningful

cheers,
Jess
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