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Racism

Submitted by alidzain on Mon, 2014-03-10 15:48

Reign of hatred spreading discrimination

Anger, uncontrolled is a blind beast unleashed

Cold is the heart which does not know the value of love

In the soul, corruption is a disease

Sum it all up from the top and see what you get....

Madness lingering in the minds of mortals

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Free verse
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Ian.T

Mon, 2014-03-10 19:25

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An excellent Acrostic I wonder how others would write the same with that word, Yours Ian.T

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