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Pillow Note

Missing me sweetheart?
I know this brought on a smile
keep it on for me

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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i wonder if the era of pillow notes has ended..i dont see any here atleast...may be this will inspire others to slip in a few here and below the pillows of their mates too....i am planniing to post a few for the sake of smiles...
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good to know you indulge in pillow notes..must be good ones...lol...keep at it..

much love..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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lol...what a modest pillow note..to express to Vanni how possessive you are..a modest way of saying too "dare not"..lol...

smilingly...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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What a wonderful idea and what a delightful poem.

Ahh thanks for sharing Raj

Love Mand xxxxxxx

good to know you liked the idea....i hope others would warm up to it as well and post a few pillow notes...

got you thinking as well about sharing a few eh!!...lol...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Is pillow notes like pillow talks
smiles and love gone for walks
Is pillow notes like feather beds
a mind of love in side our heads

Happy New Year Raj to you and yours
Love Magics

Wishing You too and your beloveds A Happy, Healthy, Wealthy, Peaceful New Year...

so good to see you visiting this write...and leaving a short and sweet poetic comments...

i would love to see you post a couple of Pillow Notes...just for fun and sake of variety...

with much love...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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A form of poetry as a post it note.........................scribbler

thank you for dropping by...

hoping your New Year has begun well...good luck and best wishes...

warmly..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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thanks for your comment ..good to know it brings on a smile...you are spot on about the smile...surely that is the essence of a pillow note..isnt it?...

would be nice to read some of your pillow note posts ...

with much love..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Oh you have quite few of them eh! when are you letting those cats outta the bag ?..we are all waiting to catch them...lol..

much love...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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you did make me smile with that comment and those winks...i am looking forward to your posting a few pillow notes here..hopefully soon...

much love and Wishing You and Your Beloveds A Happy New Year...be it full of smiles..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Oooh.....

Love this sweet, sexy, meaningful little poem. I think you have inspired me.

~A

i read your "what if my pillow could talk" before reading this appreciative comment...i did get a feeling that my post may have inspired it..good to know i was right thanks for the visit and the read and for getting inspired to post your wonderful poem...looking forward to read more...

warmly..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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i am delighted to read your humorous Pillow Note and happy to know that i sparked off these ..hopefully it should inspire others too to post their Pillow Notes.....:)

much love...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Yep...pillow notes are meant to be slipped below or on top or by the side of the pillow to light up sweethearts who are feeling the blues ...

try one and see the effect...lol...i am happy to know you enjoyed the read...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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hehehe...that's ok..i liked the humor....

raj (sublime_ocean)

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I have been inspired to wrtie some to my own Beau!

Thanks Raj,
Lori

glad to know this has inspired you to write one for your Beau...i am sure he would be delighted to read it as would the others here too if you happen to post it...

much love...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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