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Lovely roses

Submitted by loved on Wed, 2014-03-05 12:30

a message deliver,
the arrival of a new lover is near
we all love roses
my dear,
never of the thorns ever fear

they prick just slightly
you are used to severer ones

so let all roses speak for you
your love
she must earn

in the desire of innate love
she may like to,
like a simple butterfly burn

beautiful roses she will get in return

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

alidzain

Wed, 2014-03-05 12:34

alidzain's picture

nothing less than one can expect from someone like you

Alid

loved

Wed, 2014-03-05 13:06

loved's picture

this one I too think
deserves the watering
thanks
ali for your kindness

loved

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