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It Is Crazy

It’s crazy
To think poisoning
Something (alcohol)
Would stop a person
From wanting it

It only makes
Matters worse, and
Your error will return
Bite you in the behind, and
All hard work fails at end, so

Bend a little
Show respect, dignity
To all involved, and
Good of majority
Will be attained, for

Only Almighty
Can make good
For all hidden in the earth
Groaning and moaning together
Over corruption deep rooted in religion and societies

Comments

Bites you in the behind.. too much of anything drink or otherwise. I want to come back to this write Barbara. I like the several parts that conclude to the ending.

Smiles from miles
Mona
xox

yes... it does
thanks for commenting

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they didn't say what the additive was, just that it was killing people.
in the end the ban was remove. i think they say it took fifteen years.
the little i drink help me with my pain that live with me like a dark cloud

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