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Renga 8 "A Song Of Passion"

Are you feeling "Angry", "Fear", "Grief" or "Other"? Let's sing it here at Eternal Renga. Come sing a "Song of Passion" with us.

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We must learn to sing
Teach us of your ways of love
Show me the rapture

See how the passion rises
Shield me not from true loving (Ian.T)

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Lovely tanka, thanks for sharing it on my blog.

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If we sub title each state,
Love being the first part
then Loss and so on.
Could you edit the title it needs another "S" to be more Passion lol.
You have a lovely day out there and listen to the bird songs there for me and touch the humming birds with the mind.
Save a space for me in your memories it is how we live for ever here on this Earth plain, Yours Ian xx

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Thanks I didn't realized.

*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka. All Neopoets welcome to join the Collaborative Poetry Writing Workshop.
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