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SNOWY WHITE NIGHT

The night is dark
no sun
nor moon
Galaxy asleep
but you
must have seen snow
shining like my teeth
normally I don't grin
NO TEETH

LOL LOL
COME AND SEE
Through veiled clouds
will ye

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Free verse
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Not Explicit Content

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an open invitation from lovedly? I'm sure that some buxom lady of the night will take him up on that! LoL Nice change from your usual fare of death. Your little joke about the teeth rings true with most of us old timers! ~ Geez.
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I like this poem. It's short and sweet with just the right amount of humor.

"To fly is to fall."

Many thanks

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Yep when clouds are thick the night becomes as dark as the inside of a black cow lol. Your teeth are likely still white as they sit on your bedside table.............

I have no bed side table
hence NO
dinctures

no typo just scribbled

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I smell a scintillating wit in the poem. Lovedly knows how to bring humour in the scene. I love the aptness of the poem.

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