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Senyru No more hugs for you
it is not funny
when I do not get my way-
no more hugs for you
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Structured: Eastern
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My 2 year old granddaughter inspired this senryu
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scribbler
Wed, 2014-04-16 17:57
Hi Carolina girl
All the women here in Carolina must be the same lol........stan
Barbara Writes
Wed, 2014-04-16 18:29
Hi Stan
We do like our way. Lol My 2 yr old granddaughter pouts and folds her arm when she hears the word no.
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alidzain
Thu, 2014-04-17 07:29
hahaha
short, simple and direct. like it very much.
Alid