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Senyru No more hugs for you

it is not funny
when I do not get my way-
no more hugs for you

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Structured: Eastern
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My 2 year old granddaughter inspired this senryu
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All the women here in Carolina must be the same lol........stan

We do like our way. Lol My 2 yr old granddaughter pouts and folds her arm when she hears the word no.

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short, simple and direct. like it very much.

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