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A Ghostly Scene

Submitted by Abby on Tue, 2021-10-26 18:27

Drip,
Drip,
Drip,
That’s a red eye I see?
They call me delirious.
Ha.
The morals are immortal today.
We all live forever, but
the gh~ou~ls more so.
Rows of nothing but ^bats^.
What a sight to see.
They say I’ve lost my
m
i
n
d
Is it me or are we all crazy?

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - draft
Contest: 
Halloween and all that comes with it
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Candlewitch

Sun, 2022-02-27 12:12

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dear Abby,
the answer to your question is yes... we are ALL crazy. it somehow makes it easier to exist that way!

*hugs, Cat

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