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Sex female
Favorite Poets  Edgar Allen Poe
Favorite Authors James Patterson Edgar Allen Poe Sir Arthur Connon Doyle
Greatest Influence my fourth grade teacher whom inspired me to write
About me I Began writing at the age of nine and have been writing ever since author of two books third in the making instructor of creative writing mother, friend, confidant and all around good person( or at least I tried to live up to what others tell me I am) Third book is with the Publishers it's title is DARK KNIGHTS AND STALLIONS
Recent Work
CreatedUpdatedTypeTitle
20 February 200820 February 2008PoemIcarus, Psyche and I
17 January 200817 January 2008PoemDark Night, Dark Knight
22 January 200822 January 2008PoemRogue Luminary
24 January 200824 January 2008PoemNot A Lifetime (lyrics)
26 January 200826 January 2008PoemGemstones
27 January 20086 May 2008PoemAirport Woes and Airport Joes
27 January 200827 January 2008Poemtasting My Name
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My bookshelf
biblioThe Value Of Darkness 18 March 2008
biblioThe Five Senses (Do Not A Nickel Make) 29 January 2008
biblioThe Lady Is An Ocean 29 January 2008
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Submitted by RSScheerer on 18 January 2008 - 11:14am.
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Welcome, Chrys!

I just wanted to say welcome and thank you so much for joining the site. Your work and presence here will definitely be an asset to the community and I truly appreciate your interest!
~ Ronda

Submitted by poewriter58 on 19 January 2008 - 10:26am.
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thank you

Many thanks to you Ronda for having so much faith in me. Just hope I do you justice
Chrys

Submitted by chinese_whispers on 9 March 2008 - 5:09am.

Thankyou for critiquing my

Thankyou for critiquing my work. It’s a cool feeling when a real life author critiques your work…not that it’s happened before…maybe that’s why it made me so happy. Yes, I was feeling a bit disillusioned with time and loss of youth then…I was thinking of a friend who told me she wanted us all to escape to a circus on the top of a big hill and never grow up…just live there and have ice cream everyday.

Submitted by poewriter58 on 21 March 2008 - 10:29am.
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Chat hosts

Hi folks the chat room is needing more hosts
consider being one
contact either Ronda or Paul
also submit an application
www.neopoet.com/live/application

If you like talking to people and would like to help out then we can use you

Submitted by weirdelf on 11 April 2008 - 4:05pm.
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By crikey! You've already got over 2000 points!

That is really a good indicator of how much you have supported this site.
We thank you
cheers,
Jess

Submitted by Infinite_Dwarf on 12 April 2008 - 2:33pm.
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Hiya!

Thought it was about time to leave a comment on your page. Mine’s still a work in progress :~(

~Jess
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“Johnny was a chemist’s son, but Johnny is no more. What Johnny thought was H2O, was really H2SO4.”

Submitted by Infinite_Dwarf on 23 April 2008 - 1:26pm.
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hmmm...

Pictures seem to be ok on this end. Yours is the one that we took in the BR mountains. :~)

~Jess
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~ “Bush is listening…. use big words!”
~ I don’t SUFFER from insanity, I enjoy every minute of it!”

Submitted by purplemoondoll on 23 April 2008 - 1:55pm.
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Welcome back Chrys - you are

Welcome back Chrys - you are a vital part of this community!

Kaz

It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

Submitted by poewriter58 on 23 April 2008 - 5:30pm.
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kaz

Thank you and that is so nice of you to say that
Chrys

Submitted by poewriter58 on 24 April 2008 - 6:42am.
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Jess

Thank you really a welcome back from you and Kaz mean so much to me

now if you can only tell me why my picture changed on explorer but I cannot ge t firefox to change it did the first time
it is is so minor I don’t want to bother Andrew with it
just a bit disheartening because everyone else can see the new picture of ( Jess and I) but I’m still looking at a white tiger which i love but I love my daughter more and now that she is a part of the crowd well

It is good to be back still not full steam but getting there
thanks again Jess I consider you a friend( and for me that is going some lol)
Chrys

Submitted by weirdelf on 24 April 2008 - 11:59am.
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press F5 it forces your browser to download from the site

instead of from cache.
cheers,
Jess

Submitted by weirdelf on 24 April 2008 - 12:05pm.
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friend, yes.

I don’t say that easily either. But friend you are, I respect your poetry, your commentary and yourself. I grieved when you left, we need you in this community. You have read my poems. I have read yours. We know each other.
cheers,
Jess

Submitted by DarkinAZ on 1 May 2008 - 1:43pm.
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My Prayers are with you,

at this time, as you are in the hospital.

Get well soon,
and God Bless!

Sincerely,
Mark

Submitted by rider68 on 14 May 2008 - 3:06pm.
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Hi Chrys

I just thought i would add my little bit,
Just to say that you have been a great help and a very fine poetic
friend, My efforts and struggles have been eased by your comments.
and support,

Thanks

Peter
~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

Submitted by poewriter58 on 14 May 2008 - 5:05pm.
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peter

thank you so much how nice of you it is much appreciated
Chrys

Submitted by DarkinAZ on 27 May 2008 - 2:03pm.
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Sounds like,

A great idea!

Welcome, friend

-DarkinAZ-

Submitted by JANICE HERZOG on 27 May 2008 - 5:00pm.
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all of my poems

To everyone on neopoet: Thanks to everyone, including Andrew. I am looking into mentoring, if i can figure out the navigation process. 20 poems that you all will see, are what I think my best work. They were all written in a two week time span in March of 2008, except My Broken Heart. I included that one because it is supposed to be in the semi-finals with White Oak Press’s Free contest. Besides, I was hurt very badly, by someone who I thought had real feelings for me. I have been alone for 11 years, and maybe I’m too trusting, and naieve, but I am looking for true love, and i don’t want to spend the rest of my life without someone that truly loves me. My daughter Kristen, and my new granddaughter Genevieve, born May 1 2008, are my life. Without them I would not be here today. Writing poems has given me the will to stay alive, for the time being. If not for my precious Genevieve, I don’t know what i would do. P.S. Can any of you true poets come up with a poem for her name Genevieve? I am having trouble with the rhyme, and yes I would like it to rhyme. Thank-you all. Now I have some new friends, from all across the country. I live in Flint, Michigan, the Genral Motors Capital of the World. I was rasied in a middle-class General Motors family. I am 43 years old, and single, for how long, I don’t know. I am a very emotional person, and i think it is reflected in my poetry. Keep reading. Much love, Janice Herozg

Submitted by RSScheerer on 27 May 2008 - 5:42pm.
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Janice

Contact me regarding the navigation to find a mentor and I will help you through it. Send me a private message here on the site or reach me by email at ronda.scheerer {AT} neopoet.com

Sorry to flood your page, Mark!! :)

~ Ronda

Submitted by JANICE HERZOG on 28 May 2008 - 2:11pm.
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Mentoring

Dear Ronda: Sorry it took so long to reply. Weridelf got me fired up about police and cops that really suck. I am interested in mentoring from you or anyone that wants to help me. I don’t know how to write on my e-mail address, i used it so i can log on to neopoet. I had to change the original e-mail addres. Please respond to me at neopoet private messages, or at {REMOVED -Andrew} or {REMOVED by Andrew on 28 May 2008 for safety reasons}. Hope to hear from you soon. I am still trying to navigate properly on neopoet. I could not find neopoet.com, and your name didn’t come up in the private message area, it said it didn’t know you. Sorry. Much Love, Janice Herzog

Submitted by DarkinAZ on 28 May 2008 - 2:39pm.
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I encourage you

to remove your personal # + address from this post. You can Get it to Ronda via private message.

Remember “Safety First” Especially in this day and age.

Sincerely,
Mark

Submitted by JANICE HERZOG on 28 May 2008 - 2:51pm.
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my address

Dear Mark: Thank-you for being protective. I tried to send it to Ronda at private messages, but it said that it did not recognize her name or something that, so i just replied on her comment posted to me. It doesn’t bother me if she contacts me by phone or mail. If you know how to get her name in private message box, then please tell me. I am still new at even reading private messages, let alone sending them. I have e-mail thorough yahoo, but i find it very difficult to read, let alone respond to it. I just did however, try and send one, my first e-mail to Infinite_Dwarf Jess K. I think she received it. I didn’t know how to edit my mistakes, and I really don’t know that it got to her. have to wait to see. I am not very computer literate, yet, so please forgive my noviceness. Much Love, Janice Herzog P.S. Thanks for not holding a grudge. I have another new friend. Janice Herzog

Submitted by weirdelf on 19 June 2008 - 10:43am.
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Mentoring? You have got to be be kidding.

How can anyone mentor you when you say outright you don’t want feedback.
You only want praise, not help with your poetry. Unless you have had a major change of of heart this is not the site for you.
I say this sincerely , this is a poetry workshop. If you don’t want feedback go away.
Jess

Submitted by DarkinAZ on 19 June 2008 - 11:13am.
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Touche, Jess

I agree 100%

Please JANICE HERZOG get real or get gone!

-DarkinAZ-

Submitted by RSScheerer on 27 May 2008 - 5:43pm.
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LOL, I mean CHRYS!!

Sorry to flood YOUR page!! I had a brain cramp. :P

~ Ronda

Submitted by JANICE HERZOG on 27 May 2008 - 6:19pm.
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e-mailing

To everyone at neopoet: please please respond to me at neopoet.com instead of my e-mail address. I only needed the e-mail address to re-log on to neopoet.com My first one wasn’t working, and I had to have a new e-mail address to use the website. To me e-mail, even on yahoo is very hard to read, and is confusing to me. Sometimes i can’t understand what is printed because of all the stuff at the bottom of the e-mail. This doesn’t mean that I don’t want you to comment or offer advice, but please do it via neopoet.com P.S. i do not have my own computer. I use the ones at the public libraries in my neighborhood. I try and use them daily, except for Sundays, or holidays when they are closed. Thank-you all for your cooperation. Much Love, Janice Herzog

Submitted by JANICE HERZOG on 27 May 2008 - 6:21pm.
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points

Dear whoever: what are the points and what do you do with them. I know how many I have, but hwat are they for? Thanks! Janice Herzog

Submitted by weirdelf on 28 October 2008 - 7:11pm.
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you get 3 points for comments on other's poems.

You get one for each poem you post.
You get nothing but kudos, I have 14,000 points.
Voting counts to get you in the Spotlight. Vote for the poems you like.
cheers,
Jess

Submitted by mark on 5 June 2008 - 3:55pm.
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Look at that !

Another badge ! Chat Host Moderator. Now ya can throw me out on my ass when I call you Chryssie ooops lmao oooooh no !

Submitted by poewriter58 on 5 June 2008 - 5:01pm.
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Badges ????

“We don’t need no stinkin badges”.lol
hey mark thanks aren’t they pretty glad you joined my profile page party
Well I am celebrating 50 yrs of writing after all
I’m proud of those badges all kidding aside and thank the powers that be for them
Chrystalie
(because someone asked)

Don’t even think of trying it Loiselle

Submitted by Infinite_Dwarf on 12 September 2008 - 9:44pm.
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Gasp!!!

Sir Loiselle swore!! I done heard ‘im!!! LOL! Your bling looks very pretty. Wear it proud! Still working off Ronda’s pushups for mine, maybe you can help…. put a Hershey bar down on the floor, or something… LMAO! Love you, mom!

~Jess
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“Live every day as if it were your last; one day you’ll be right….”

Submitted by themoonman on 5 June 2008 - 4:10pm.
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Hi Chrys...

it would seem that your profile is the place to be.. I was
feeling a little left out…lol.. isn’t this rewarding..!
glad you are here..
Richard

Submitted by poewriter58 on 5 June 2008 - 4:56pm.
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yeah

It’s a party on my profile page see there you aren’t left out any longer
it’s my magnetic personality lol
Chrystalie

Submitted by mark on 18 August 2008 - 11:09pm.
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uh huh

turtles, now they got personality ! I want me a turtle !

Submitted by Catalina on 12 June 2008 - 11:18pm.
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It was a pleasure for me as

It was a pleasure for me as well, from one fish to another - nice to meet you, lol ;)

Submitted by orgami on 17 September 2008 - 10:53pm.
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cool of September

you have left me such supportive words
and Your poetry has depths of beauty
the lilt of passion in shadows
deepening I am glad you are here
writing expressing sharing

thank you

Submitted by poewriter58 on 21 September 2008 - 5:56pm.
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steve

How kind of you to say such nice words thank you it is always nice to know someone out there appreciates your work
Chrys

Submitted by weirdelf on 28 October 2008 - 8:53pm.
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I posted a comment on the wrong profile,

Sorry. I stuff up often. That comment was not meant for you.
respectfully,
Jess

Submitted by theladyblue on 1 November 2008 - 1:47pm.
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woot for writting!

<3 Emarie

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“For every shadow, no matter it’s depth, is threatened by the morning’s light…”

Submitted by Hilton Briscoe on 19 November 2008 - 9:56pm.
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Heya Chrys, Just thought I would add my bit.

I have only just met you but already I love you!

You’re a darling! I can tell we are going to be good friends for a long time, well I hope we are going to be.

Submitted by electricblue on 20 November 2008 - 9:28am.
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Dark Knight

hello Chrys

WOW this poem is awesome. Written rhyme of ancient time. A tale of a fable foretold. I love the wording in this write. Running from yourself with your heart pounding so loudly. It drowns out all existence. But you cannot run away from yourself. Rivulets of tears. I know what it is to be in this place of the unknown. In the Darkness. Dark Knight never sees daylight.

Electricblue

Amazing thrill

I love the way you write i am hooked to read more.

I like the style you write.

To send you into dreams.

Chrys

Maybe you can look at one of my poems - Running thru the meadow

Submitted by poewriter58 on 20 November 2008 - 10:43am.
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wow

maggie you dug an old one up. I wasn’t running from myself . That poem was written for a very dear friend. Thank you for the compliment and sure I can do that for you
Chrys