Pinksheep today was my first exploration
of allowing others to comment on my poems

I am also on Diaryland as my username Orgami
people there too encouraged me
which led me to further reveal my folk craft

thank you so ever much for your comments

for one to know beauty in words and passages
it too is also within one to sail verbs
adverbs nouns and nuances upon the seas
of poetic waters

i too am an artist
but painting is another “rush”
as is this newfound pace

i shall continue to support
my works here

with kindest regards

..O..

cheers,
Jess

i really like it …. nuances upon seas of poetic waters….also really appreciated comments of elfs’ and Marks’-pink

i’m infatuated with your style of writing–
just thought i’d mention it

i feel to me that it is interesting and different to say infatuated by
a style of writing-i am still wanting to become more sophisticated like
people such as yourself-sincerest regards

please bear with me, i want to find a better word than sophisticated, it can
mean something a little more shallow than just being complex , however if i
described your work as just being simply complex that would be far too dry-regards