Thanks for comemnting on everyones work. I appreciate it immensely.

Peace

Thanks for your comment on ‘The Silent Quill.’ You are much appreciated. Frederick

Hello…thanks for the comment on A Child’s Treasure… i wrote it when i was 14 but i tossed it and i found it few months ago and i had to translate it in English(it was written in Spanish)I appretiate the critics,thats what im looking for..it will improve my poetry….
thanks
_Dominick_

I am glad you liked my latest offering.
Freds

A big ‘thankyou’ for your kind comments. Believe you me, I had as much fun writing it as you had reading it. The whole topic stemmed from an instant message conversation. ‘Guar The Mouse’, ‘Sugarbowl Ants’, and ‘Jai’s Escapades’ have all come from the same conversation. I’ll post them when I get a chance. :~)

~Jess
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“Johnny was a chemist’s son, but Johnny is no more. What Johnny thought was H2O, was really H2SO4.”

Thank you, Kaz. Any size criticism is necessary to fine-tune anything! Tiny, perhaps…largely appreciated, for sure. I agree with avoiding abbreviations…your input helps all of us to learn.

I’m still trying to navigate my way around here. Is there someplace where I am supposed to say “hi?”

Peace, and thanks again for your comment (on “You’re Not Alone”)
Kim (GreenBean)

Hey Kaz! Thanks again for commenting. The dediction for my Green Grass Hill write is actually quite a bit longer than the actual poem…thought I’d spare the details. Had fun growing up in a developing neighborhood in the late sixty’s…some friends have passed. This poem is for them!
Thanks!
Kim (GreenBean)