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clever… and, all the twos add up to six which equal six strings!
:)

Always, Cat

Nice sum! My math was better than I knew–Thanks for telling me!

This makes me think of a revision:

strange
2 have
2 work
so hard
2 play
6 strings

Is this a better poem do you think? It changes the “point” I think…

is even better i would say Rob, go for it. Keith

Hi, Keith (and Cat). I decided to use Cat’s observation in the title, allowing the poem itself to still end with its grand double entendre rather than with its limited musical meaning. Thanks!

Smiles:)
Barbara

short and sweet

Thanks–I got some great advice on it!