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Submitted by Rob Graber on 28 March 2008 - 9:01am.| Updated 30 March 2008 - 4:38pm.
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not big fans of the game
but when we went out
only yesterday
to find a lamp
under which to examine
the blue star sapphire
i had just given you
i peered at your face
as you peered at the gem
ever so intently…
six points! you cried
your eyes ashine
touchdown
(1 vote)
Hi Rob,
six points! Wow! I would ask if you scored the extra point, but then I know a true gentleman never tells. Very nice poem, and a nice play on words. You have a lucky lady, to be sure.
Always, Cat
Well, the poem is not
Well, the poem is not ENTIRELY autobiographical… :-,? Thanks very much indeed!