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Submitted by skumpfsklub on 21 April 2008 - 12:29pm.

Tsk! Resting on your laurels?

This seems … terribly derivative. What you wrought in ‘Test’ only shines the brighter for this lackluster performance.

But keep trying! I love your stuff!