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Barbara Writes
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Submitted by Barbara Writes on 24 March 2008 - 11:53am.
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Lonely journey, I have no confidant
I find myself running on want
Traveling this road all alone
Though unfair, I’m in a zone
Lonely eyes, I see no sunshine
Our love I left in the pines
Like a kite in the night
Sadness took away my might
Lonely days, I sit by your grave
Remembering the life, we once shared
Wondering where we’d be today
If that tragic moments never came
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Sweet, sad and lyrical. I
Sweet, sad and lyrical. I just spotted one line that night need correcting and that is the last one? If that tragic moments? Or should that read moment?
Kaz
It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
thank you
Barbara Writes you are so right another typo. I will fix it. Really appreciate your eye for detail.