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Gumpymonkey

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IU,

I see dueling twiddles upon meager hill.
U see dancing statues gliding on ecstasy.

I battle plagued with certainty of lengthy defeat.
U battle smugly using the arrogance of nature.

I assert that cycles will die a premature.
U assert life itself has yet to fail us yet.

I weep for heroes that never were.
U weep not knowing thou are one.

I learn afoul to avoid leaps of love.
U learn pain is a scholar to precede.

I breathe truths of emptiness and less.
U breathe an abundance, dreaming of full.

I wish to now place U before I.
U wish I greater place than for U.

UI.

My first poem!
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Submitted by asiajy on 12 March 2008 - 8:19am.
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Welcome

Not bad for a first poem. I would have never thought to write one that. Welcome to Neopoets. Hope you submit more work.